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From what I can tell of the first chapter, this is going to be a very bias based book. It will also be confusing. In the first chapter the main character, Tambu, goes off rambaling about brother and how much she dislikes him, but she also goes off into tangants about random things about her life style, which can make the whole story confusing.
She starts off talking about her brother, and why he doesnt like to walk, then she starts talking about all the things a person could do on the walk he has to take, and then after two or 3 paragraphs links that to why she hates him. So it can get a bite confusing at times, since she does somthing like this ever couple of paragraphs.
Matthew, this post needs editing. What do you mean by "bias based book"? I see 6 spelling errors in this very short 2 paragraphs. Please edit your posts. Also, work on more depth. Why do you think she is doing some of this rambling, and tangents? What do you notice so far about how the author has put this work together?
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