So far my paper is go9in along well. I do have the minimum of writing but would like more, so ill work on that in later drafts. The formation might be a little messed up, so if we have time in class, ill work with Dr. D in class on that. But the subject matter is interesting.
I never thought that a political change like this would really matter. Changes like this happen all the time. But its the details of what will happen that are interesting. If North Korea does decide to go to war, most if not all of southern Asia will be a war in some form or another. And then the U.S. will probably intervene and help someone, most likely South Korea and China (if china were to get dragged in) since they are our allies. Its a very interesting issue.
I never thought that a political change like this would really matter. Changes like this happen all the time. But its the details of what will happen that are interesting. If North Korea does decide to go to war, most if not all of southern Asia will be a war in some form or another. And then the U.S. will probably intervene and help someone, most likely South Korea and China (if china were to get dragged in) since they are our allies. Its a very interesting issue.
good post for the most part. Check punctuation and spelling. I hope that your draft improves, and you are satisfied with your final draft.
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